Thursday, November 26, 2015

The two metaphor is the " all the hours piled high" it is a metaphor cause you can't pile hours 
The metaphor is all about going back to the past because there's a time machine. Lots of imagery 
Birth and death side by side makes it more powerful. This is putting to different things together that makes them powerful is juxtaposition.

Imagery

1, .
ckels swayed on the padded seat, his face pale, his jaw stiff. He felt the trembling in his arms and he looked down and found his hands tight on the new rifle. There were four other men in the Machine. Travis, the Safari Leader, his assistant, Lesperance, and two other hunters, Billings and Kramer. They sat looking at each other, and the years blazed around them

2, They sat in the ancient wilderness. Far birds' cries blew on a wind, and the smell of tar and an old salt sea, moist grasses, and flowers the color of blood.                    A touch of the hand and this burning would, on the instant, beautifully reverse itself. Eckels remembered the wording in the advertisements to the letter. Out of chars and ashes, out of dust and coals, like golden salamanders, the old years, the green years, might leap; roses sweeten the air, white hair turn Irish-black, wrinkles vanish; all, everything fly back to seed, flee death, rush down to their beginnings, suns rise in western skies and set in glorious easts, moons eat themselves opposite to the custom, all and everything cupping one in another like Chinese boxes, rabbits into hats, all and everything returning to the fresh death, the seed death, the green death, to the time before the beginning. A touch of a hand might do it, the merest touch of a hand.

3,Warm phlegm gathered in Eckels' throat; he swallowed and pushed it down. The muscles around his mouth formed a smile as he put his hand slowly out upon the air, and in that hand waved a check for ten thousand dollars to the man behind the desk.

Metaphors

You are the brightness of the sun when you smile at me 
The sun is the size of you
The energy of the sun is you when you run in a race

Simile 
You are as fast as wind.


Wednesday, November 25, 2015

Imagery

Simple imagery 
Five senses 
 Quality of the sun
Heat 
Colour
Brightness 
Distance
Size
Energy 
Life span
You are the brightness of the sun when you smile at me 
The sun is the size of you
The energy of the sun is you when you run in a race

Friday, November 20, 2015

Sound of thunder

1.10000 dollars 
2.if Deutscher became President they wanted to go live in 1492.
3.Put your first two shots into the eyes, if you can, blind them, and go back into the brain."
4.sixty million two thousand and fifty-five years
5. t's an anti-gravity metal. Its purpose is to keep you from touching this world of the past in any way. 
6. There clothes were sterilized
7.We wear these oxygen helmets so we can't introduce our bacteria into an ancient atmosphere."
8.Very few. How many times they mate. Not often. Life's short, 
9. That he is nervous and scared. He's not sure if he it the right thing to do. He's not really into 
10. Why, why," Eckels twitched his mouth. "It could reach up and grab the moon."

Thursday, November 19, 2015

Analogy

Similly  is a comparison using like and as,
Metaphor is a transference of a quality from one thing to another. 
Analogy is a comparison to another thing 


 Billy is to the landlady as the mouse is to the mouse trap 

The landlady is a mousetrap waiting for its pray.

Climax

I think this because this when he remembers who were the 2 people and he's about to say it when she suddenly butts in and we don't know what happened to the 2 people. Then he tries again but she butts in again. So in the end we don't know what happens.

Wednesday, November 18, 2015

Climax

101 plot
Ordinary world setting 
Character
Disruption 
Conflict 
Man vs man 
Man vs nature 
Man vs society 
Man vs himself 
Man vs technology 
Rising action c
Climax  the point of the greatest tension 
Resolution the result 
Return to ordinary world 
Establishment of new world order 





Minion story 
Ordinary world minion in lab
The distrustion banana 
Conflict man vs himself 
New order minion with banana 
Man vs minion 

Thursday, November 12, 2015

Landlady questions

2. Foreshadowing is an advance sign or warning of what is to come in the future. The author of a mystery novel might use foreshadowing in the early chapter of his book to give readers an inkling of an impending murder.
Example: " left?" She said, arching her eyebrow." But my dear boy he never left. He's still here mr temple also here. They're on the third floor both of them together."
3. The dog sleeping at the fire inferred  that it is a cozy place. The inference is that the dog turned out to be dead.
4.it makes it like a murder act. And the landlady isn't nice and she is evil now.
5.the landlady has very good imagery. For example "But the air was deadly cold and the wind was a like a flat blade of ice on his cheeks." Another one is " Suddenly in a downstairs window a brilliantly illuminated by a street light not far away." I think this because you can almost see these descriptions in front of you. You also can imagine that you are Billy and feel and see the things that Billy would see and feel. So that is why I choose these to pieces of imagery from the landlady. 
6.the landlady is a murderer who is loves to kill and stuff young men. She  also wants to murder billy and stuff him like Temple and Mulholland. I thin this because in the story she says "Left?” she said, arching her brows. “But my dear boy, he never left. He’s still here. Mr. Temple is also here. They’re on the fourth floor, both of them together.” I think this because in the book it said mr Mulholland was there for three years, so this meant that they must be kidnapped or something like that. 
7.in the landlady the ending finishes to sudden. I think this because at first I didn't get what was going on and I think it would be better if the story would go a little bit more to get a hang on the story. This is why I think the ending is too short.

Friday, November 6, 2015

Landlady foreshadowing

Foreshadowing is an advance sign or warning of what is to come in the future. The author of a mystery novel might use foreshadowing in the early chapter of his book to give readers an inkling of an impending murder.
Example: " left?" She said, arching her eyebrow." But my dear boy he never left. He's still here mr temple also here. They're on the third floor both of them together."

Landlady volcabury

Swanky: She danced in a swanky dress.
Congenial:The hotel looked congenial 
Rapacious: His eyes rapaciously starred at the money 
Dither:He was dithering about going up to him.
Compelling: He was compelling her to go to the cage.
Compulsion: He had a compulsion to kick her
Dotty:she'll go dotty if she see a spider 
Dainty: she a dainty girl
Tantalizing:  his book was accompanied by tantalizing photographs. 
Linger: he lingered around the room 
 Emanate:his cooking odors emanating from the kitchen. 
Malevolent: the eyes on the man had malevolent look
Naive: he is a naive boy.
Gullible: the little kid was too gullible 
Beguiling: the old lady looked a nice little lady, but she a beguiling women.