Thursday, December 10, 2015
Smell Imagery
The smell of tar. Imagery of smell is used to help the reader 'smell' what the character in the story smells. A sound of thunder's author uses lots of great smell imagery to help describe the setting of the story. A example of smell imagery is The smell of tar and an old salt sea. Roses sweeten the air. " roses sweeten the air" is great smell imagery because you can almost smell the roses a and imagine the character smelling the roses. The smell of tar an old salt sea is great smell imagery because the author describes a kind of bad smell and you can imagine how the characters smelt and felt in that moment. Overall A sound of thunder uses smell imagery to help the reader to imagine what the character would smell.
Thursday, December 3, 2015
Thursday, November 26, 2015
The two metaphor is the " all the hours piled high" it is a metaphor cause you can't pile hours
The metaphor is all about going back to the past because there's a time machine. Lots of imagery
Birth and death side by side makes it more powerful. This is putting to different things together that makes them powerful is juxtaposition.
Imagery
1, .
ckels swayed on the padded seat, his face pale, his jaw stiff. He felt the trembling in his arms and he looked down and found his hands tight on the new rifle. There were four other men in the Machine. Travis, the Safari Leader, his assistant, Lesperance, and two other hunters, Billings and Kramer. They sat looking at each other, and the years blazed around them
2, They sat in the ancient wilderness. Far birds' cries blew on a wind, and the smell of tar and an old salt sea, moist grasses, and flowers the color of blood. A touch of the hand and this burning would, on the instant, beautifully reverse itself. Eckels remembered the wording in the advertisements to the letter. Out of chars and ashes, out of dust and coals, like golden salamanders, the old years, the green years, might leap; roses sweeten the air, white hair turn Irish-black, wrinkles vanish; all, everything fly back to seed, flee death, rush down to their beginnings, suns rise in western skies and set in glorious easts, moons eat themselves opposite to the custom, all and everything cupping one in another like Chinese boxes, rabbits into hats, all and everything returning to the fresh death, the seed death, the green death, to the time before the beginning. A touch of a hand might do it, the merest touch of a hand.
3,Warm phlegm gathered in Eckels' throat; he swallowed and pushed it down. The muscles around his mouth formed a smile as he put his hand slowly out upon the air, and in that hand waved a check for ten thousand dollars to the man behind the desk.
Metaphors
You are the brightness of the sun when you smile at me
The sun is the size of you
The energy of the sun is you when you run in a race
Simile
You are as fast as wind.
Wednesday, November 25, 2015
Imagery
Simple imagery
Five senses
Quality of the sun
Heat
Colour
Brightness
Distance
Size
Energy
Life span
You are the brightness of the sun when you smile at me
The sun is the size of you
The energy of the sun is you when you run in a race
Friday, November 20, 2015
Sound of thunder
1.10000 dollars
2.if Deutscher became President they wanted to go live in 1492.
3.Put your first two shots into the eyes, if you can, blind them, and go back into the brain."
4.sixty million two thousand and fifty-five years
5. t's an anti-gravity metal. Its purpose is to keep you from touching this world of the past in any way.
6. There clothes were sterilized
7.We wear these oxygen helmets so we can't introduce our bacteria into an ancient atmosphere."
8.Very few. How many times they mate. Not often. Life's short,
9. That he is nervous and scared. He's not sure if he it the right thing to do. He's not really into
10. Why, why," Eckels twitched his mouth. "It could reach up and grab the moon."
Thursday, November 19, 2015
Analogy
Similly is a comparison using like and as,
Metaphor is a transference of a quality from one thing to another.
Analogy is a comparison to another thing
Billy is to the landlady as the mouse is to the mouse trap
The landlady is a mousetrap waiting for its pray.
Climax
I think this because this when he remembers who were the 2 people and he's about to say it when she suddenly butts in and we don't know what happened to the 2 people. Then he tries again but she butts in again. So in the end we don't know what happens.
Wednesday, November 18, 2015
Climax
101 plot
Ordinary world setting
Character
Disruption
Conflict
Man vs man
Man vs nature
Man vs society
Man vs himself
Man vs technology
Rising action c
Climax the point of the greatest tension
Resolution the result
Return to ordinary world
Establishment of new world order
Minion story
Ordinary world minion in lab
The distrustion banana
Conflict man vs himself
New order minion with banana
Man vs minion
Thursday, November 12, 2015
Landlady questions
2. Foreshadowing is an advance sign or warning of what is to come in the future. The author of a mystery novel might use foreshadowing in the early chapter of his book to give readers an inkling of an impending murder.
Example: " left?" She said, arching her eyebrow." But my dear boy he never left. He's still here mr temple also here. They're on the third floor both of them together."
3. The dog sleeping at the fire inferred that it is a cozy place. The inference is that the dog turned out to be dead.
4.it makes it like a murder act. And the landlady isn't nice and she is evil now.
5.the landlady has very good imagery. For example "But the air was deadly cold and the wind was a like a flat blade of ice on his cheeks." Another one is " Suddenly in a downstairs window a brilliantly illuminated by a street light not far away." I think this because you can almost see these descriptions in front of you. You also can imagine that you are Billy and feel and see the things that Billy would see and feel. So that is why I choose these to pieces of imagery from the landlady.
6.the landlady is a murderer who is loves to kill and stuff young men. She also wants to murder billy and stuff him like Temple and Mulholland. I thin this because in the story she says "Left?” she said, arching her brows. “But my dear boy, he never left. He’s still here. Mr. Temple is also here. They’re on the fourth floor, both of them together.” I think this because in the book it said mr Mulholland was there for three years, so this meant that they must be kidnapped or something like that.
7.in the landlady the ending finishes to sudden. I think this because at first I didn't get what was going on and I think it would be better if the story would go a little bit more to get a hang on the story. This is why I think the ending is too short.
Friday, November 6, 2015
Landlady foreshadowing
Foreshadowing is an advance sign or warning of what is to come in the future. The author of a mystery novel might use foreshadowing in the early chapter of his book to give readers an inkling of an impending murder.
Example: " left?" She said, arching her eyebrow." But my dear boy he never left. He's still here mr temple also here. They're on the third floor both of them together."
Landlady volcabury
Swanky: She danced in a swanky dress.
Congenial:The hotel looked congenial
Rapacious: His eyes rapaciously starred at the money
Dither:He was dithering about going up to him.
Compelling: He was compelling her to go to the cage.
Compulsion: He had a compulsion to kick her
Dotty:she'll go dotty if she see a spider
Dainty: she a dainty girl
Tantalizing: his book was accompanied by tantalizing photographs.
Linger: he lingered around the room
Emanate:his cooking odors emanating from the kitchen.
Malevolent: the eyes on the man had malevolent look
Naive: he is a naive boy.
Gullible: the little kid was too gullible
Beguiling: the old lady looked a nice little lady, but she a beguiling women.
Thursday, October 15, 2015
Teen vogue paragraph
Teen vogue is a magazine about fashion and celebrity's kids. The audience cares because they want to know what hot and what's trending. They also care what fashionable outfits famous people wear. A famous person in teen vogue is Selena Gomez, she is in the magazine she is a singer who is very pretty and she also does a little bit of acting. She also always wear the newest outfits. Another person is Taylor swift she is a singer a songwriter and a actress this makes her interesting. She also is in shows that lots of people watch so this makes her famous. Kylie Jenner is in teen vogue because of her big lips. She is unique with her lips and that makes her famous. They have an audience that is teenage girls that care about fashion and celebrity. Overall teen vogue is all about fashion, beauty and celebrity's and celebrity's kid.
Friday, October 9, 2015
Info
Headline info:
-need catchy words to make the reader want to read it.
-think about the audience and choose the story's and headlines
- short and catchy
-directed at audience
Paragraph info:
-language directed at audience
-appropriate for audience
- easy to read
- story is for audience who your writing for
Headline info:
-need catchy words to make the reader want to read it.
-think about the audience and choose the story's and headlines
- short and catchy
-directed at audience
Paragraph info:
-language directed at audience
-appropriate for audience
- easy to read
- story is for audience who your writing for
Headline info:
-need catchy words to make the reader want to read it.
-think about the audience and choose the story's and headlines
- short and catchy
-directed at audience
Paragraph info:
-language directed at audience
-appropriate for audience
- easy to read
- story is for audience who your writing for
Thursday, October 8, 2015
Review
Our magazine is teen vogue. Our magazine is about fashion and celebrity. The fashion part is the newest styles and what celebs wear. The celebrity part is about what celebs are doing, also about celebs daughters and sons. It's also about what celebs wear at big events and photo shoots or intresting outfits they wear.
Magazine
Magazine info
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Thursday, October 1, 2015
Sports day paragraph
Every year bisb has an event called sports day. In sports day we do athletics and the girls did netball and the boys did football. I think it is a great idea. I think this because there was no uniform and no homework so we had fun without any boring classes. Although the organization was bad, there was no school so that means no learning.
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